Bell Shop Sketch (Audio)

Another bloody Yacob sketch: http://soundcloud.com/yacob83/bell-shop-sketch .

Any comments on the writing, performing, music, editing, sound effects, would be great.

Thanks
Yac X

The idea was good. But it never really peaked into full farce. The first joke was good but the rest didn't top it. To be honest, I didn't get the one-sided phone conversation bit. What was that meant to be?

It was still a great try and I see a lot of potential in it.

I also liked the first gag but you didn't really build from it. Maybe you could incorporate a cow sound for cow bells and Santa for sleigh bells, just throwaway ideas really. It depends were you want to take the sketch.

The sound effects were fine though, listening to it, I felt that it was inside a shop.

I quite liked it because it was weird and I found it relaxing like I was listening to Tony Blackburn on the radio. I really thought it was going to mention the word BELLEND and I waited in anticipation for this. Welldone for editing all this yourself, clever stuff!

I enjoyed it. Loved the first joke--the only thing I'd change would be to lose the foreshadowing--"I warn you it can get confusing". I think it's funnier with no giving away beforehand. Other than that I think everything was strong, including the performance. Were you playing both characters?

Thanks for the comments so far. Yes, both characters were performed by me.

Then, well done to you, and well done to you.

Nice idea though I feel you could done more with it.

Bo.