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Internet Shopping Sketch (Audio)

Hello

Me having a go with writing, performing and editing an audio sketch: http://soundcloud.com/yacob83/internet-shopping-sketch . Any thoughts on it would be great.

Cheers in advance
Yac

Did you play both parts? If so good job. The idea is a good one, the pay-off is logical, obvious even which isn't a bad thing at all, you're taking the audience with you there. The jokes weren't laugh out loud if I'm honest, but as sketches go I liked it.

I've got a Soundcloud account myself and never thought of using it for sketches. Maybe I'll try this too. Cheers!

As for suggestions on gags, think about plays on words, puns, mis-heard or mis-read instructions. ie:

"I asked for some sachets of green tea, and you've brought me..."

"...some sausage and green beans"

"I also wanted some Irish Cream but you've brought me..."

"...Pile cream."

But I liked it, do some more.

It was good, Yac. Performed very well. As Marc says, it wasn't LOL. But it was funny enough.

Couldn't be arsed to do an animation? ;)

Cheers guys.

Quote: M Paterson @ August 31 2011, 8:28 PM BST

Did you play both parts? If so good job.

Yep, both me.

Quote: Leevil @ September 1 2011, 1:41 PM BST

Couldn't be arsed to do an animation? ;)

Totally.

Quote: Yacob Wingnut @ September 2 2011, 2:11 PM BST

Cheers guys.

Yep, both me.

Cool. I think I might do one then. The more people who do their own audio on here the better. Maybe it'll spur the BCG to get it's act together re: the podcast.

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