5 minutes of stand up

Hi folks,

Here's a 5 minute set I did recently. Sorry for the quality of the recording but I think you can hear everything. Constructive critisism gratefully received.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cdyrEHycLpc

I thought there was a big visible improvement from your last vid, in terms of your presence, confidence and ease, your material and your 'character'.

I'm not really a big fan of these type of "jokes" as such, whether done well or not, but I thought you came off as pretty polished and had I been there I'd have assumed you've been at it for a while. My feedback would be to say consider this one a successful gig, because it was.

Thanks JD.