Ok,
Here are my comments on the entrants:-
A Fish Tale - YES - This is my script. I like it, many may not.
Animal Something - MAYBE - I loved the start, Nice opener, the entendres flowed well. Baillie, I wasn't sure if they should be male or female. I think that it would work better with Baillie as a female. It did tail off and I'm not sure if this was a sketch or a sitcom. Has potential though.
Apocalyptic Cafe - NO - Sorry, I didn't find it funny. The opening scene didn't work very well, I can see where the writer was going with the motivational speaker but I think it didn't work.. I saw one joke in the 1st two pages. Not my cup of tea I'm afraid. The cannabilsm thing had potential to work but needed to be more in your face. Nice touch at the end with the twin sister. I liked that.
Art for Art Sake - YES - Intellectual humour and its funny. I love Steve, he is no nonsense and very funny. I was giggling away at this script. Alot of good modern and topical humour with some strong characters. Nice script, very well written. Very nice setting for a sitcom.
As Plain as Day - MAYBE - How many times can you make jokes about panda semen. Some of the jokes were too descriptive and rather than laughing, I was feeling disgusted. The idea is good, nice potential for a sitcom. The conflict between the Chief Inspector and Jack could run for a good few episodes. I like the fact that Jack is terrible at being undercover. The ending was good, I enjoyed the reasons for the panda hunt.
Doing it for the Kids - YES - I really enjoyed the script, I could visualise Gemma with the tongs going into the sack and the disgusted look on her face. Nice script, well written, clever plot. Not sure about the end, it looks like Gemma is about to get sacked, I think she is the star character and I would like to see more from her.
Go Wild in the Country - YES - Nice script that flowed along. I liked Victoria as a character, she stood out. Jim and Richard were a bit samey. I liked the ending and the stream of jokes about the two dead friends. The corny one liners at the end of each act were a bit naff tbh, luckily the rest of the script was well written and provided a good steady stream of funnies.
Kiss Me Son of God - NO - Sorry, I never found this funny. I liked the characters and the interaction, but I didn't enjoy it. Too much pussy footing around. The Frank and Dick scene at the golf club didn't work for me. Sorry, not my cup of tea.
Love Bites - NO - Sorry, I didn't enjoy this. I got bored half way through, two blokes talking about their sad life wasn't funny and the scene dragged a bit. The scene with the two girls was shorter but unfortunately not any funnier. I didn't feel that I could connect with either Martin or Dennis and again a couple of the jokes were too descriptive and made me quesy rather than laugh.
Leaping Tiger - MAYBE - I like the idea of it. I like the Holy man and Leaping Tiger as characters, alot of this wasn't that funny. Ronnie Baxter was a good character also. I didn't like the ending or the direction Mrs Barlow took. Its definitely got potential for a series. The Buddhist Monk Acadamy of Footballing talent. I chuckled more at the idea that the jokes.
Main Text - MAYBE - Too many characters, I was starting to lose track of the various characters. You could have done this with Clive, two of the job seekers and the cleaner at the end. I liked the end scene. Nice and short and funny. It would need a rewrite but it has got some potential. Clive was getting repetitive with the line "Listen I'm just thinking of you, I don't want to set you up to fail!" Some of the jokes went over the PC boundary in my opinion.I did like it though and I liked some of the humour.
Not at the Allotment - NO - Its well written, Daphne and Edward are decent characters. I didn't find it funny though, there was a couple of nice moments but nothing inspiring. A couple of wasters living in a flat together has been done before. The Pizza Cutter scene was bizzarre. Sorry, not my cup of tea,
Stepping Stone - NO - I liked Charlotte, nice character. The other two I didn't like. Not all that funny either. Sorry but this wasn't really my cup of tea. I did like the part about them spilling the tea on the envelopes and drying them on the heater, not sure if spilled liquids is a good idea on stage though.
The Taking of Pelham 123 - MAYBE - Its funny, I couldn't engage with the characters though. Not sure where the guy is going with this as a sitcom. I liked the take on the riots though, nice idea.
Talent Spotters - NO - This looks and smells like a sketch. I don't see the potential for a sitcom here. I've no engagement with the characters. Its funny, the sitcom ideas are good, I love the Ambulance Chasers one.
The Mad Axeman and Her - NO - A couple of nice exchanges, I like the Angela character. The plot was weak. Needs to be a bit fiunnier also. I did like spectacle case bit. Not sure that the honey would work on stage. I'm not sure where the author would go with this for future shows.
The Tragic Life of Roger Bulwark - YES - Ok, this reminds me of Wilfred, but this is well written, funny and the characters are good. Zak is similar to Wilfred and Roger is similar to Ryan. It may be too close to Wilfred but its funny.
The Wednesday Thursday Club - No - Too many characters, it didn't flow for me. I didn't find it overly funny and the only character I liked was Emily. The Wednesday Thursday joke was repeated too often. Sorry, I didn't enjoy this one.