Awesome Love Song - Critique away :)

Hi guys,

Here's my Funny Quirky Inspirational song entitled 'Awesome Love Song'
It's a story of one musician who dreams big. Real big

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xqagLQMc36w

I tried to write something that's quirky/amusing, but tries to tell a story at the same time as well. Not sure if I achieved that balance there.

Let me know what you think, hey?

Cheers,
FunnyOddSongs.