Episode four of the series this time written Andrew Flaherty. This episode will air on Soundart Radio 102.5 FM on Wednesday 17th.
Episode Four: The Meeting - Jeremy goes for a meeting at the Beeb but his past experiences come back to haunt him and his agent ends up ditching him for Giles meanwhile Geraldine makes her attentions clearer towards Jeremy but after confiding in his uncle he is left confused to what to do for the best.
I think this is definitely the best one so far, it seemed a lot more polished...
A few deep sighs here and there, maybe a one or two too many...
Liked the 'big cities' and 'Gary Liniker' lines...
It would appear you've fixed the logline relating to the plot issue, you were straight in there this time...
Once the meeting bit was over it kind of drifted a bit but now we know the Spicer character we can understand why...
Good stuff...
Quote: RedZed333 @ August 8 2011, 10:34 AM BSTI think this is definitely the best one so far, it seemed a lot more polished...
A few deep sighs here and there, maybe a one or two too many...
Liked the 'big cities' and 'Gary Liniker' lines...
It would appear you've fixed the logline relating to the plot issue, you were straight in there this time...
Once the meeting bit was over it kind of drifted a bit but now we know the Spicer character we can understand why...
Good stuff...
Thanks. Well expect more sighs things are getting worse for Jeremy.
This is a lot better, some nice gags enroute. And it's more engaging interesting story. (Facebook, nice)
But..
1 Stop sighing, you stop this about 3 minutes and it gets my interest much more.
2 Get Spicer to say what the other characters say. Otherwise Gerladine et al are a tad bland.
3 Don't foreshadow, don't say the interview failed in the first minute.
Every gag that told me about Spicer drew me, I's give him a fist to the face, I live with my parents and they buy my pyjamas, I envy John Mcirrick and find SJP attractive.
They're great because they all come from character
I didn't make it to the end, but I hate listening to monologues so that's probably not your fault.
But from what I heard this was much better than previous episodes and I did make me laugh a couple of times. Nice one!
I like the title.
This episode deserves more than one note sarcastic reviews.
This episode deserves more than one note sarcastic reviews.
Quote: sootyj @ August 8 2011, 5:28 PM BSTThis episode deserves more than one note sarcastic reviews.
It's not a sarcastic review, Sooty. I haven't listened to it. Glad people are hearing some improvement.
Yes it was an improvement.
My PC didn't crash this time.
Look forward to the next one, the word within the industry is that it's a cracker.
Quote: Steve Sunshine @ August 13 2011, 9:11 PM BSTYes it was an improvement.
My PC didn't crash this time.Look forward to the next one, the word within the industry is that it's a cracker.
Thank you episode five will be online soon and air on the radio in two weeks.