Comedy Song (well sort of, I hope so)

Here's a song I quickly threw together this evening on the ukulele that I'm considering developing and putting into a routine. I'd be very grateful if you could check out the link below and let us know whether it may be worth pursuing further??

Any feedback would be gratefully welcomed. Apologies in advance for the quality of the video I literally did it in 1 or 2 takes.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xr0HfE-NUsI

Thanks,

Jason.

I hate zeros in the listings and thus I hada shufty.
Improved presentation and diction would maybe help to improve my poor
impression. The lyrics weren't that funny and could also maybe do with
a bit of attention. Nice voice. Well worth persevering. Good luck.