If the British Afterlife was bureaucratic, this maybe what its like.
This is a project I've been working on for a few months. Very savage dark humour strip. I'm presenting it as a kind of web comic which I'm planing to animate at a later date.
first strip is here
new strip every thursday, all feedback welcome! Even if you think it's a pile of ridiculous shite!
Cheers!
It's not a pile of cock, not genius, but hovers somewhere inbetween.
The idea is very sound, and as far as I know original, which is a good start. The art is fine as well.
The content... well, it's quite good, but none of the strips made me giggle, although some are better than others. I'd say it's definitely on the way up, and well worth persevering with.
Thanks for your feedback, always good to find out something isn't a pile of cock (unlessthat's what you were looking for) Still trying to feel my feet with the scripts I'm just trying to set the scene really at the moment. I have another character to introduce then hopefully the humour should increase!
These are not too bad, surprised you didn't get more feedback. You could maybe do with being a little more concise with the speech. What do you use to make them?
Thanks 
I use illustrator to lay them out and it's a wordpress site, very simple and does the job.
Is there a free version of Adobe Illustrator? Or have you forked out nearly $600?!
I'm a designer (not that you would think it from the site) so I have access to such software at work. You'll be able to get a trial version from the site though I would expect.
Ah right, cheers.