Thats cool Teddy I know that, I just figured the line needed tweaking that was all. Maybe teed up by the swimmer first. 'Am I getting anywhere?' Kind of thing.
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Its a throw away and a pretty obvious one at that I thought, so there is no way I could possibly be offended. I'm just interested in gauging responses in relation to the basic humour.
I know I repeatedly state this, but my aim at the moment is just to create ideas.
If anyone even offered me a pound for what I do, then I would really look at the whole thing and deconstruct and reconstruct it as a matter of course.
I think that's why I an too acidic to the nuances as they are highlighted, I'm just putting up the basics rather than spending my day with a spirit level checking the full stops are even.
I've know that saying..too well! so it's a yes from me.
Quote: Marc P @ July 20 2011, 12:04 PM BSTIf it helps Teddy - I wasn't taking the piss.
Actually, I was explaining the joke; the coach was taking the piss out of the swimmer...
Quote: Shandonbelle @ July 20 2011, 12:25 PM BSTI've known that saying..too well! so it's a yes from me.
'Snap' on both points from me 