2 SAMURAI ARE WITH THEIR SWORDS DRAWN INSPECTING A CASTLE
THEY LOOK FEARFUL AND GLANCE AROUND CONSTANTLY
THEY ARE WALKING DOWN A DARK CORRIDOR
SAMURAI1 STOPS AND PICKS UP SOMETHING AND SHOWS IT TO SAMURAI2
IT'S A MARS BAR WRAPPER
AN UNCONCIESE NINJA FALLS FROM THE CEILING INFRONT OF THE 2 SAMURAI
Would have been better if the falling ninja was unconcious...
Sooty Takashies Castle has got more plot than that one I'm afraid.
I think it's a funny idea, just underexplained.
I think if it ended with a samurai saying a badly-dubbed "DIABETES!!" followed by a few seconds of awkward dramatic zooms in their faces, that would do it for me. I'd be in chucklesville.
A destination in its self I'd imagine!
Hi Eggy I was thinking of it the other way round.
That the title would flash up and the audience would be trying to guess what it was about.
Hi Eggy I was thinking of it the other way round.
That the title would flash up and the audience would be trying to guess what it was about.
Funny idea, maybe the two samurai could have planted mars bars as part of their ambush.
Sorry to reiterate my point Sooty, but even if they both performed Seppuku with Curly Whirly's, I'd still want my money back on this one I'm afraid.
Quote: Shandonbelle @ July 18 2011, 10:02 PM BSTFunny idea, maybe the two samurai could have planted mars bars as part of their ambush.
That's an interesting idea for a sequel
I liked the idea, but has to be reworked, me thinks
sorry Sootyj but I just don't get it?
If it wasn't for the title no one would get this, you need a mars bar/diabetes link...
The ninja would have to be shown to be wearing a diabetic identity braclet...but that's probably becoming a bit too medical 
Hardly Ronin,a secret assassin who uses stealth as an art is hardly going to buy a bracelet with something like 'Lactose Intolerant' written all over it.
Quote: Shandonbelle @ July 18 2011, 10:42 PM BSTThe ninja would have to be shown to be wearing a diabetic identity braclet...but that's probably becoming a bit too medical
That's clever...