Dr Fingerman's weird patient.

I just thought I'd post a link to my latest animation for crits. and giggles.

Enjoy! I hope.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ip83tHd3LNc

Mr Pie.

Hi Shoe

Once again I liked this, particularly the animation. I think that maybe this time script could be a bit sharper though and IMO there's a joke just waiting at the end when the Doc surmises on the shoe size ; six and three eighths.

But still enjoyed this and sits well with the others. More power to your elbow.

B

Very good again Mr Pie. Love the concept and the first half. It flags a bit though after the 31 second point. More gags possible.

Thanks for the replies Badge and Blenkinsop. Yeah the script probably could do with tightening up a bit, and a bigger joke at the end.

My original edit was 2 minutes long and the guy was going to hop around on his head but it felt like it was going on for too long. So the script jumps around a bit now with a minute chopped out.

Yeah I liked it. If you could squeeze in more jokes though, maybe having background gags would be easier, like a funny poster in the background or something?

Very good. Maybe instead of a shoe he could recommend some athletes foot cream

Thanks, I like the ideas, keep them coming. Poster is good, in a previous animation I was going to have a big cheesy grinned Tom Selleck poster in the background but copyright concerns stopped me.

heh heh - that's great! I think my favourite one of yours. surreally silly.

Kerry and James - this is bloody funny. I think it's the most professional looking one yet!

I love the eye movements and the zoom in at the start

Thanks guys, I'm glad you enjoyed it. The animation and sound recording skills are slowly getting there!

I had a play around with Anime Studio 5 today and it wasn't as scary as I first thought. OK so I still don't have a clue what I was doing but the skeleton manipulation was fun.

The tutorials in the help menu are really good too.