The second episode of the new series. This one was written by me.
Episode Two: The Reshuffle - There's been a major reshuffling of the university's radio station schedule meaning Jeremy has been relegated to one night a week. Giles however gains from this and there is still no word from the BBC regarding Jeremy's application of work.
I got five minutes in James, but this character just drones on and on. There's no laughs coming from his personality for me and I think that's a massive problem if you're doing such a character based piece.
Quote: Ben @ July 15 2011, 6:26 PM BSTI got five minutes in James, but this character just drones on and on. There's no laughs coming from his personality for me and I think that's a massive problem if you're doing such a character based piece.
Is it me or are you getting further into listening to my stuff?
No, I'm just exploring BDSM.
Quote: Ben @ July 15 2011, 6:28 PM BSTNo, I'm just exploring BDSM.
What while you listen?
I wrote a 400 word review of episode one which you never even bothered to acknowledge so I won't bother listening to this one and just go with my gut instinct instead....
It's shit...
Quote: RedZed333 @ July 15 2011, 6:51 PM BSTI wrote a 400 word review of episode one which you never even bothered to acknowledge so I won't bother listening to this one and just go with my gut instinct instead....
It's shit...
I'm very sorry I didn't answer you review the first time round. Most of the points if not all of them just said which bits you enjoyed and didn't enjoy there wasn't much I could say as it's your opinion.
Quote: James Cotter @ July 15 2011, 6:27 PM BSTIs it me or are you getting further into listening to my stuff?
What's with the irritating traffic noise in the background?
I noticed it the first part, too - what little I was able to listen to.
I think it's to add atmosphere, keewik. I, however, found it distracting.
I was a bit dissapointed when I realised the ticking was just a sound effect. I thought I must have been cooking something and was quite looking forward to it.
Quote: Ben @ July 15 2011, 8:28 PM BSTI think it's to add atmosphere, keewik. I, however, found it distracting.
I shall work on toning it down somewhat.
Quote: Steve Sunshine @ July 15 2011, 10:35 PM BSTI was a bit dissapointed when I realised the ticking was just a sound effect. I thought I must have been cooking something and was quite looking forward to it.
I was quite perturbed as I thought some vagrant had snuck a grandfather clock into my hallway.
If there were no sound effects it would be described as too plain so you can't win.
Quote: James Cotter @ July 17 2011, 1:18 PM BSTIf there were no sound effects it would be described as too plain so you can't win.
Wouldn't he be recording in a sound proof studio..?