v2 (V1 below)
CAPTAIN MISUNDERSTOOD
"The terrorist bastards destroyed the angry wasp sanctuary! The angry wasps are coming, if you don't cover up it's your fault if you get attacked!"
CAPTAIN MISUNDERSTOOD REALISES HE IS ADRESSING A SLUT WALKS OF MEN AND WOMEN IN SKIMPY UNDERWEAR
CAPTAIN MISUNDERSTOOD
F**k sticks
The idea seems ok, if a bit whimsical, but other than that I couldn't see any jokes or any edge in the sketch sorry, probably just a taste thing.
Too many ideas I will edit it
https://www.comedy.co.uk/forums/thread/10444/
A sequel to this trilogy
The beginning was good, and I liked the wasp sanctuary bit, I didn't think the direction it took after that suited it somehow. I'd have liked to see the Captain go on about wasps but without the slut walk angle.
V2 lost some how forever oops
That one is miles better, love it 