Seinfeld Sketch Comp Entry.

Here's my entry into 4Laughs strange Seinfeld Script Comp.

http://www.channel4.com/4laughs/share/competition.jsp?competitionId=5620

I was too busy watching the character counter thing, 1000 limit!

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INT. MONK'S CAFE - DAY

JERRY & GEORGE CHAT OVER A COFFEE.

GEORGE
So Jerry, you entering into that 4Laughs Script Comp?

JERRY
Why would I want to do that?

GEORGE
You know, it'll be funny, you Jerry Seinfeld, entering into the Seinfeld competition.

JERRY
I don't know, I do funny all the time, can't I ever be crazy or even sexy.

GEORGE
They're already taken by Kramer and me.

JERRY
I've never thought of Kramer as the sexy one.

GEORGE
Ha ha very funny.

ELAINE WALKS IN AND SITS WITH THEM.

ELAINE
Hey guys what's up?

GEORGE
Hey Elaine, I was just trying to convince Jerry to enter into the Seinfeld 4Laughs Script Comp.

ELAINE
Oh my god Jerry, that would be so funny.

GEORGE
See, Elaine thinks so.

JERRY
No, no It'll be tacky.

GEORGE
Tacky?

ELAINE
Tacky?

JERRY
Tacky.

KRAMER RUNS IN AND SITS DOWN.

KRAMER
Hey you guys, guess what? I just entered the Seinfeld competition.

JERRY
You see what I mean?

KRAMER
What?

GEORGE
Jerry won't enter, he thinks it's tacky.

KRAMER
Yeah it is for him. I once entered into a Kramer-a-like competition and came third.

END.

Very good - you display a great grasp on character.

There's a small gramatical error:

GEORGE
Their already taken by Kramer and me.

should be:

George
They're already taken by Kramer and me.

Yes I'm a pedant. Anyway great stuff.

Thanks Nick, much appreciated!

And edited!

Class

Thanks.

lol - a true Seinfeld classic!

Cheers Wii-man.

I thought this was a good take on the competition, different and unique, very post-modern is the expression, I believe.

Thanks SlagA.

Hi Leevil

I like it. Captures the characters very well and believable. Well done.

Dan

Ta! Dan.