Howdy
Quick cartoon I'll probably send into 'Funny in 15': (very slight re-edit) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1rXZ8fRDPwc . It needs a bit of work. Any thoughts on the script, look, sound, acting and anything else would be super.
Best wishes
Yac
Cubism
Quote: Yacob Wingnut @ June 20 2011, 7:11 PM BSTHowdy
Quick cartoon I'll probably send into 'Funny in 15': http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WT5ndWa3Dqo . It needs a bit of work. Any thoughts on the script, look, sound, acting and anything else would be super.
Best wishes
Yac
It was a bit too predictable for me scriptwise. I liked the colours and the voices though.
Cheers Ben. Yeah, it is an obvious joke I suppose (possibly I can make it less obvious with the editing. Will ponder). Glad you liked the look/sound.
Just noticed I need to speed parts of it up. Obviously that won't help the script; it's just something else I realised.
I enjoyed it, and the animation is good.
Cheers Lady Laughter.