COMIC: The Talk
I don't get the joke. At all.
Me either!
Mmmm. Ok may need a reworking cheers for looking 
Well, it's the law of gravity isn't it? 
Not sure it's a winner though, Gav.
Quote: Nil Putters @ June 20 2011, 9:13 AM BSTWell, it's the law of gravity isn't it?
Give that man a sticker 
Obviously missed the target on this one. C'est la vie.
Out of interest, Gavin, what are you trying to achieve with this one?
Quote: Nil Putters @ June 20 2011, 9:13 AM BSTWell, it's the law of gravity isn't it?
Actually the law of universal gravitation.
A bit different.
I think you need a degree in engineering to get it 
Even when you do.....
Great style though Gav
Quote: Bryan Parry @ June 20 2011, 11:44 AM BSTOut of interest, Gavin, what are you trying to achieve with this one?
Blow job from Newton would of been nice. But I think he's dead.
Uh It's just a simple gag really of the similarity between the law of gravity and the human mating ritual.
I'm glad you've all been honest that's why its in critique. I can rework it quite easily.
PS. Did anyone get the 2 nerdy nods in there?
Quote: Gavin @ June 20 2011, 12:13 PM BSTBlow job from Newton would of been nice. But I think he's dead.
Uh It's just a simple gag really of the similarity between the law of gravity and the human mating ritual.
I'm glad you've all been honest that's why its in critique. I can rework it quite easily.
PS. Did anyone get the 2 nerdy nods in there?
Which two nerdy nods? I understood it was about the scientific theory...
Mario & The Princess?
I quite like it. Think it's worth it with a couple of tweaks. First, don't use the man-and-woman spiel. Better to have the dad always referring to gravitation, but the daughter assuming othe eg 'when two bodies get close...' or 'when there's mutual attraction...' etc.
Reminds me of Neal's comment on the birds and the bees
"So how come the bird doesn't get stung"
Quote: Bryan Parry @ June 20 2011, 12:17 PM BSTWhich two nerdy nods? I understood it was about the scientific theory...
Zelda and Link. Although the 2 have never had sex.
And the Black Latern Tshirt.
...Back to the drawing board.
Quote: Badge @ June 20 2011, 1:44 PM BSTI quite like it. Think it's worth it with a couple of tweaks. First, don't use the man-and-woman spiel. Better to have the dad always referring to gravitation, but the daughter assuming othe eg 'when two bodies get close...' or 'when there's mutual attraction...' etc.
Not a bad idea. mmmm
I think you missed out the words 'of the' in the final frame.