But the real question is: How did it go?
As I said, it could be that the delivery made the material work better than it does on a flat, dull screen. I hope it did go well, as I don't want anyone to have a bad gig.
If he wants judgement of the material, a video will allow much more accurate responses.
Even if it didn't, no reason to give up.
Quote: Lady Laughter @ June 18 2011, 9:19 AM BSTBut the real question is: How did it go?
Went well...
Teddy P... The scouse reference was a pussy last second change of heart because I'm whiter than white (neon white) and the San Andreas ref was concieved with innercity london youths, but the accent kept coming off like there was some racist angle, so I dropped the cockney yoof and lazily fell back on The Capital Of Culture 
You're right though, it's tired and the whole point was to later say they should be locked up but there's a prison shortage, then ask What the f--s a prison shortage? A brick shortage? An iron bar shortage? etc, but I forgot the punchline so it ended up a Christmas cracker nugget about thieveing scousers (I didnt do any attempt at a scouse accent though)
As for Jesus abs, I liked that line... It's funny cos its true... but my friend told me after he'd heard a similar joke once, we Googled "Jesus Has A 6-Pack" and apparently it's common knowledge - so all that stuff is going out the window.
Thanks for the comments
Was gonna give some feedback -- albeit late -- but now it's been deleted so I can't. 
I read it the other day.
Anyway, very good stuff, mate, but there was one or two bits I felt could use tightening up, but without seeing it again I cannot comment further.