Hello All
Quick cartoon I'll probably send into Funny in 15: (sound re-edited a bit now) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D65Mfnr0AwU . There are a few things in it I need to fiddle about with.
Any comments on the script, look, voice, sound, anything else, would be splendid.
Cheers
Yac
That's great 2 sub punches are very neat
slight niggle machine gun fire seems to break the rhythmn of the language
Made me giggle.
Nice reveal. Made me do a snorty noise.
Animation and voices seemed fine for a 15 second clip. Maybe some sirens could help.
Cheers Guys. Will play around with the sound. Will probably add a siren or two.