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Thought Point - Reworked after feedback

Wasn't sure whether to add this to the original thread or not. Apologies if I should have.

So, here it is. I've raised my game and changed it slightly. All yours...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e9MSVaXDQNA

PB.

I laughed again, especially the part where you are frantically trying to press the stop button,very funny and original,...the new ending is ok but I wasnt sure that the pics were apt for a 'thought machine' in that they showed what you were doing rather than what you were thinking, but I really like this sketch all the same.

That's a fair point. I'll have to remove them. I'm happy with the sound effects, so they might be okay with text. The crash one will work for sure, and for the heart monitor, I'll add 'I think I'm gonna make it' just before the beep becomes steady.

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