Watch that banana peel!

Hi All

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PzNPHGP7sB4

A not-quite-finished cartoon quickie I might send in for the 'Funny in 15' competition (although they do have a no music rule. Wonder if that rule still applies if the music was created by the entrant). Any comments on any aspect of this cartoon would be grand.

The hole in the ground looks a bit naff and there are some missing bricks - Will fix those things soon.

Cheers as always
Yacob

Pretty good without being really good.

I liked it. If there's a problem with music can't you just replace the music with footsteps and the guy happily whistling to himself?