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Detective radio sitcom - need honest feedback

Hey guys.

I'm a sporadic poster but a regular reader.

I've written two sample episodes of a radio sitcom based on a 1940s noire detective thingy.

I've written the two scripts on two different bits of software so the formating's a bit all over the shop and there are a couple of typos in there etc but I've just finished the second one today and wanted to get it up for some initial feedback.

So this is the first and last episode and I have ideas for what happens in between with more twists, more mysteries, suspects, characters and character development to give it all the angles of a murder mystery.

Some of you may have heard the recording of the first episode I put together a while ago. Just want to know if these are worth sending off with a synopsis sheet and a brief of what kind of things could/will be included inbetween.

I've written the first and last ep in such a way that they work without the middle as a sample. It leaves the story a bit thin but that's where the rest would come in if it were taken up.

It's a lot to read but if you can that'd be ace, or just as much as you want.

Ta all!

http://users.cjb.net/tompk/dick%20backard%20ep1.pdf

http://users.cjb.net/tompk/dick%20backard%20ep2.pdf

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