http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Z4sKEH_WmU A video that I made when I was bored, if I get more people watching me I'll make more videos that are better!!!
Hey Here Is Real Fun!!
Welcome Dexter, love your enthusiasm but it's not that funny. It would help in future videos if you sorted out the audio as it was pretty hard to hear a lot of it.
Oh, and this should've been posted in either the Critique or Showcase threads for optimum feedback.
Moved to Critique for you. 
Quite painful, but you do have good enthusiasm for this, so keep trying.
You are a terrible actor, though. Maybe you could rope some friends in and you could just write and direct.
LL tell us more about you because I am becoming fascinated.
I have a feeling she might be an alter ego for a more regular poster on here...
I'm getting worried now As Lady Laughter did like a couple of my sketches or was nice about them.
I'd ask if you had anyone specific in mind?
But I know that this sort of speculation isn't always appreciated by the Moderators.
Feel free to PM me though as I do lke a bit of gossip from time to time.
What? The acting is terrible, it's not very funny, enough said.
SS - you seem to be the most consistent sketch writer on here and are usually funny, so that's what I say.
I don't understand why you get so arsey about negative comments. It's no use mollycoddling people who produce bad stuff. I'm blunt, so live with it or throw me off the forum.
Quote: Steve Sunshine @ May 1 2011, 2:17 AM BSTI'm getting worried now As Lady Laughter did like a couple of my sketches or was nice about them.
I'd ask if you had anyone specific in mind?
But I know that this sort of speculation isn't always appreciated by the Moderators.Feel free to PM me though as I do lke a bit of gossip from time to time.
Every one likes you Steve
your so flipping nice
like a Christmas blowjob from Santa
nb multiple ID concerns please contact a moderator rather than discuss it.
You'll save us a lot of hassle.
Quote: Lady Laughter @ May 1 2011, 9:48 AM BSTWhat? The acting is terrible, it's not very funny, enough said.
I'm not sure you quite grasp the meaning of the word critique LL And I know it wasn't me you were referring to as being arsey and my question was a genuine one. Just curious to know more about your aspirations and what not. You seem to have come riding into critique like Clint on his mule in FOD. I am sure Vader will apologise to your mule! I'll look at OP's piece now so as not to highjack his thread completely.
Quote: DexterEvilGenius @ April 30 2011, 8:52 PM BSThttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Z4sKEH_WmU A video that I made when I was bored, if I get more people watching me I'll make more videos that are better!!!
It did make me laugh, but I fancy it went on too long. As LL said gets some friends roped in - some of your characters were better portrayed than others and the flying one didn't really have a punch - as the others kinda did. So trim it down, sort your audio out as others have said, and good luck with your subscribers!
Why the American voice? annoying and too long, sorry, keep trying though!
Maybe he is American Dellas? At least he is not northern.
Quote: Steve Sunshine @ May 1 2011, 2:17 AM BSTI'm getting worried now As Lady Laughter did like a couple of my sketches or was nice about them.
I'd ask if you had anyone specific in mind?
But I know that this sort of speculation isn't always appreciated by the Moderators.Feel free to PM me though as I do lke a bit of gossip from time to time.
I think I'm just too paranoid! My mind looking for patterns that aren't there.