Quack Soup

INT. KITCHEN

George sits at the table, failing to eat soup with a fork. He repeatedly scoops the soup up but it drains back into the bowl.

Frank enters the kitchen and spots what George is doing.

FRANK
That's typical of you.

GEORGE
What?

FRANK
Mr Lar-de-dar. Eating soup with a fork. You think you're so sophisticated, don't you?

Frank grabs a spoon, scoops himself some soup and eats it.

FRANK
(Smug)
Not so hard was it?

GEORGE
Yeah but, I was just trying to fish out my filling.

Frank face drops.

GEORGE
I think you got it though, thanks.

George continues to eat the soup with a spoon.

END

thank you Leevil. A little chortle to that cheered me up no end.

No! Thank you kind sir.

Back at you DS.

Just looking back through my sketches in the past year. This is good, isn't it? Needs to be smartened up a bit. But yeah?

I like it.

But....

for me there is a little problem. Could you use a different word to fish? The way my mind worked when I read it the first time was to link it to a fish soup. It's probably just me though.

Noted and thanks!

Top drawer.

Is that where the knickers are kept?

Cheers.

I think if it ends on 'Frank's face drops' it'll be perfect. Really funny.

Why a filling...?

Why not a whole tooth...?

I think even George would be put off soup if his whole tooth fell out and into the soup.

Thanks for the lookin', peeps.