Suburban Bohemia - Episode 1 Page 2

There were definitely some good points to this but like others have said the characters are not very endearing. It is well written and shows your obvious ability as a writer. I thought it could have a few more jokes in there. But all in all not bad at all.

Many thanks. Most of my favourite sitcoms have some pretty unsympathetic characters in them.
I am currently trying to write something slightly 'warmaer' about a guy with aspergers and his friend who live the downstairs flat of thehis parents house.