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Brian Park 2 : Where are they now?

As per usual it's not LIVE live yet, this is a sneak preview so if you spot anything wrong with sound etc. let me know please.

Cheers to David and Chris!

Would love feedback too :0)

http://www.shoepie.co.uk/48/

Howdy Howdy.

Good to see Brian back. Really liked Dave's voice performance, animation looked good. Not enough 'new' for my personal taste. But it was quite funny probably could of done with a few more gags.

Good stuff as usual mate.

It's very good, Shoeman. Nice to see Brian back. Could do with a few more cut-aways though. It's a wee bit too long to jusr feature Brian himself.

Cheers for the comments. Hmmm interesting, I didn't think it was too bad in terms of joke attempts/per minute but we'll see what other people think I summapose. I have lost all perspective after 6 months of start-stop development.

Good stuff, Kerry. The Alan Hanson (sp?) joke is lost on me but what I understood I liked!

Cheers David.

I'm going to edit both parts together into a short film which will end with the sad ending from part 1. I think it will work much better without the need for the re-cap and losing some of the weaker jokes from both parts.

Enjoyed it greatly, you've really got something here; hope it leads to bigger things for you.

Quote: ShoePie @ February 4 2011, 1:02 PM GMT

Cheers David.

I'm going to edit both parts together into a short film which will end with the sad ending from part 1. I think it will work much better without the need for the re-cap and losing some of the weaker jokes from both parts.

I think that's a good idea. Part 2 is funny but it doesn't exactly break new ground. Now you've got both parts laid out in front of you you're in a better place to pick and choose the funniest moments.

Could I suggest Brian have some competition, or meets a new friend/girl? If you're going to make this into a longer feature, it would be nice to have a happy ending, what with the nature of the character.

Quote: Leevil @ February 4 2011, 3:43 PM GMT

Could I suggest

Absolutely not.

:(

Thank you Don!

It won't necessarily be much longer Leevilson, and bringing new characters/story is beyond where I want to go with Brian now. He's sort of happy at the end! :)

Now I've done some basic 3D animation my next one will be a lot more visually exciting! Perhaps a fight or a chase would be a good challenge!

I really enjoyed that. Good animation, good voices, and well produced.

Thank you!

Regards

Skoob.

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