British Comedy Guide

Chief Inspector Toby

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I like this the mixture of slight punchline and weirdness pleases me

Thanks, Sooty. Do you think it would work better with Toby on the left so you read his bubbles first?

Yes that could help

Really like this. Straight to the point. Nice one

Thanks, guys. This was one of the first ideas I ever had, cut it down from a far too fleshy skech idea.

Another good 'un, Corey. (Not sarcastic.)

I really like the 'for f**k sake' line and a nice little punch too.

:) Thanks! Now I've just got to work out what to do with it!

One criticism, perhaps: the container in the strip is a (Toby) 'Jug', not a mug. :S

Exactly, he's a jug not a mug!

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