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She was failing to connect that what she was hearing was coming from the Invisible ink man instead putting it down to voices in her head. Yay/nay?

I think the last one is a tad to clever, maybe reduce it to just one idea?

I wonder if it is more to do with the sequence you read the speech/thought bubbles? I thought it might help if I change things to usher the sequence people read it.

I think you're giving the punch away in the first scene?

Maybe if we only realise he's invisible when she can't find him?

Or is he's a stalker perv?

Oi will t'ink about it, SootyJeebers! T'anks!

"A message from that invisible ink guy!"

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"Oh, it says I'm not going to be able to see him tonight."

badumtish!

A couple more.

I enjoyed them, but I had to think about them a bit before I totally got it.

I think the problem with the first one is that he seems to be gay, but then stalks her. I would remove 'fambuoyant' and panel 2 needs to focus more on his obsession with her to set up the last panel better. The Asyl R Us was a bit distracting I think you could make the font smaller and fit in the word 'Asylum'. I liked the paper cutting gag.

I liked them chuckled at both new ones keep them coming.

The first one is confusing as you've made him camp for some reason, that he ends up fancying the ASY guy though is funny.

Really like the second one, that works really well, 'your pad or mine'

Thanks for your thoughts. I messed the first one up, I'll try and remedy it.

I think they are a really nice set of Cartoons Corey.
They have a definite style & are funny.
Although I was also confused by the stalking one

Thanks, Steve!

Not the same thing but not deserving of its own thread...