I'd concentrate less on punctuation than ruthless editing if I were you, Donna. Iron out the creases once you've knocked a thousand words off the thing. It's too small a subject to spend this much time on - whether it be a stand-up routine or a blog.
I like what you have done Sooty, I can see where I need to go with it now.
David- I will. I am going to knock it about next week and once I have, I will post what I've done.
Yuh just thinking from a standup point of view
Have to agree.
Leggins only for the pretty girls