What does everyone think about this short video?

Hi, starting my own comedy channel on YouTube, done my very first video/script today as a trail.
Can everyone tell me what they think, comment and subscribe?

http://www.youtube.com/my_videos?feature=mhum

Tips and advice, maybe topics would be great too.
Thanks.

Edited by Aaron - capital letters.

Moved thread. You'll need to change your link too. It only works for you. Look at it: 'my videos'.