Well guys this is the first stand up video I've ever made, and all I need is some opinions on it.
Positive or negative opinions are welcome.
Constructive criticism prefered.
Hope you enjoy the video and look forward to your feedback
Thanks.
First stand up ever by Jeremy Jay Jezza
I think "master" might be pushing it.
The guy performing did an okay enough job but the crudity of the material made it all but unwatchable. And I don't mean crude so much in the sense of smut (which can be very funny indeed if done properly) I'm talking about a general lack of polish and reliance on weak punchlines. A good example of what I'm talking about can be seen at 00:47, where I was obviously expected to laugh but instead felt a little twinge of shame on behalf of the performer as he smiled gamely through the first of many soulless transitions.
But you know what, all of that's fine so long as you can take it on the chin and improve the quality of your material over time. You're young lads and you're out the gate early - that counts for a lot. Keep working on it, and if you want a truly demoncratic opinion, take it onto the stage and test it in front of a live audience.
Best of luck to you.
Putting this in Critique for you. 
(And closing the duplicate thread.)
Okay thanks guys, I really appreciate the feedback as you've actually gave constructive criticism and not just flamed it.
We're currently taking everything you said into account, and now we're going to try to improve our selfs and we'll be back with a new video.
Oh and by the way, The performer isn't actually Scottish he was doing impressions.
He's actually from the West Midlands, Stoke.
I thought so!
He really needs to work on that I can always tell a fake one from a mile off. He's putting too much emphasis on the some of his words.