Neds and a Robot

Hi there,

This a wee 3 minute film me and my brother made at the weekend.

I would love to hear your opinions on it

www.youtube.com/thegreatsd

Thanks

Steve

Recognise this from a certain football forum. Strangely enough I was going to recommend you to this forum when you posted on JKB.

I'd pretty much agree with everything "wibble" said. Great camera work, especially the scenes where he's running and they camera people have to backtrack.

The down thing is that it seems a bit aimless and that there's no real plot point to it, just showing the finished robot, runs, falls down and end. I read on JKB that you were going to do more with it, something about an aerial transmitter going wrong and he destroys the town, which sounds much better.

Mon Kyle!

Cheers for the reply.

Its a small internet world!

Mon the JTS!