Thoughts? Has this been done before?
A QUEEN VIC-LIKE PUB: AN EASTENDERS-LIKE TROUBLED YOUNG MAN (GARY) STANDS BROODING AT THE BAR. EXTRAS STAND AROUND DRINKING BEER AND ALCOPOPS. AN EASTENDERS-LIKE GIRLFRIEND (SHELLEY) ENTERS.
SHELLEY:Gary?
GARY: Yeah.
SHELLEY:Can I say something to you?
GARY: " "
SHELLEY:I was wrong.
GARY: Oh yeah?
SHELLEY:Yeah ... He is worth it.
GARY: Right
GARY WALKS ACROSS THE BAR AND PUNCHES ONE OF THE EXTRAS IN THE FACE.