Hello There
Very quick cartoon: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q2XZc_0dS34
. Any thoughts on the script, look, acting, timing, music, sound and anything else would be funky-fresh and groovy.
Cheers
Yacob
Newton Quickie
I liked that, Yacob. I think the music and animation suited the length.
As in you don't have to put up with either for long? (just checking)
When I said animation, I actually meant background detail. Apologies for saying one thing and meaning another.
I liked it. I would either have him not say the second time it caused him to forget it all mind and have a line showing it - something about apple pie or something... Or have a beat when the music stops and then another apple falls and the music starts up again [RULE OF 3 OR SOMETHING]
But just my thoughts - very nicely made.
Cheers guys for the comments so far.
Ending on a third apple hitting him on the head would imply he'd understand gravity for a second time, wouldn't it? Think it'd be better to leave the sketch without that being assumed.
Your best yet, Yacob. Very much liked the choice of music. I think Marc's idea of having Newton demonstrate amnesia rather than just declare it is a good one.
Cheers DB and Marc P. Not sure what the best way of showing instead of telling would be and not sure if doing it would improve the sketch by that much - I'd like to get into and out of the sketch as quickly as possible and I think having Newton explain what's going on might be the best way of doing that.
Saying that, maybe that's my opinion just because animation takes ages and I'm looking for any excuse not to do too much extra work. Hmmmmmmm, not good.
I'm going to agree and say that having another way of showing he's forgot it rather than explaining that he has would be better.
Apart from that I liked it though.
Very good, Yacob! I got what was going to happen straight-away but still enjoyed it. Wish I'd thought of that sketch to animate 
I didn't anticipate, but I'm not a mastermind like young Mr Leevil. I think it works best as the two apple trick it is - gets to the point and gets out with a laugh.
Nicely done.
Good stuff