Hi all
First time on this board. Just put up my first entry on my new blog for a comedy blog I am writing.
Any feedback would be massively appreciated.
As a forewarning, the content is not suitable for anyone under 18.
http://thegraduatescomedy.wordpress.com/
Ta,
Bob
Have also added a second part now as well (same link).
As above, any comments would be greatly appreciated.
Um... sorry, but to me it comes across as purely crude banter.
Yeah, not sure of the appeal here. The two main characters are completely unlikeable and their banter has no wit. What's the intention for the blog?
Sorry Bob but I didn't get any chuckles here. Stick some more up though.