My first pilot.
Written, shot and directed by me with no budget and in one day. Phew!
Lessons - sitcom pilot
I was enjoying it until the toilet scene, at which point I gave up watching.
Look guys, if poo were funny, comedy movies, comedy TV, comedy radio and stage comedians would never have been invented. Everybody would just sit on the bog, necking laxatives and laughing their tits (and/or bollocks) off at the hilarious results.
Please aim higher with your next effort
Quote: Veronica Vestibule @ December 26 2010, 9:35 PM GMTPlease aim higher with your next effort
Pissing up a wall?
Quote: Tim Walker @ December 26 2010, 11:21 PM GMTPissing up a wall?
Not quite what I meant but certainly a step in the right direction.
Thanks for the feedback, but that is just one quick scene. And the the poo shot was to let the viewer know why the character was unhappy with the previous toilet user, whilst being embarrassed upon leaving the toilet to a waiting queue and then saying that they could never go there again as the next visitor would think HE left the poo.
Hope it makes a bit more sense and as I said, it isn't a big scene.
Thanks for watching.
For those that missed it!