Please check out The John & Jay Show on YouTube.
http://www.youtube.com/user/JOHNBONDNE?feature=mhum
We do this for fun and some of it's a bit rough but we appreciate feedback that will help us become better, thanks
"The John & Jay Show" a YouTube comedy show
You've got some balls, but this just comes across as a couple of mates monkeying about. I watched the first 3 minutes, but couldn't watch anymore. Not really sure there's an outlet for this sort of thing outside your social circle.
Didn't really know what to make of it. It seemed a bizarre mix of serious acting with the arsing about stuff. I'd concentrate on one or the other. And the segments need to be shorter, we live in an ADHD world.
Thanks for the feedback. We're only 16 but we're both passionate about comedy and entertainment, so we've decided to write and plan the show now.
You can but learn. And, at your age, you've got plenty of time. Just stick at it and seek to improve.