My second attempt at Christmas Hip Hop comedy

Please take a look and see what you think

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GwNL1_R4jnY

All feedback, particularly negative, gratefully received.

Jhon

This a dear Jhon posting: Very pro., quite amusing and a hell of a lot
better the stuff that's inferior. And there's a whole load of that.
Happy Christmas.