Bathwater of the Gods (elephant impression)
Not a strong enough ending for me.
I'd keep "your" line the same in the first panel, moving Dolph's to the second with a just him in close up. Then have Dolph and an actual elephant (with headband) in the last frame with a speech bubble saying the same line.
No, I think you need the middle blank frame in a piece like this. For me, anyway; it's basically a visual pause.
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Quote: Nil Putters @ November 28 2010, 12:15 PM GMTNot a strong enough ending for me.
I'd keep "your" line the same in the first panel, moving Dolph's to the second with a just him in close up. Then have Dolph and an actual elephant (with headband) in the last frame with a speech bubble saying the same line.
Thanks for the fresh take, Nil. To me the idea of a guy hoovering up a peanut with his dick is funnier than a human/elephant hybrid (which is really sootyj's territory anyway).
Quote: Matthew Stott @ November 28 2010, 12:19 PM GMTNo, I think you need the middle blank frame in a piece like this. For me, anyway; it's basically a visual pause.
Yeah, I'm a big fan of the silent frame.
Quote: David Bussell @ November 28 2010, 2:04 PM GMTThanks for the fresh take, Nil. To me the idea of a guy hoovering up a peanut with his dick is funnier than a human/elephant hybrid (which is really sootyj's territory anyway).
Fair does, I just thought it was a bit obvious. Fun as always though.
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You could feature my dear chum Kajumbo if you ask nicely, I believe Nil may even have a picture of him.
Quote: sootyj @ November 28 2010, 6:52 PM GMTHey leave me alone!
You could feature my dear chum Kajumbo if you ask nicely, I believe Nil may even have a picture of him.
Just creating a bit of personal territory so our sketches never under any circumstances overlap for fear of some sort of catastrophic dick joke paradox.