Sam and Josh / Comedy Sketch

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YSlBr8yoAUg

if you could please comment on here or YouTube, it would be much appreciated.

thanks

The two lads are entertaining characters (in themselves) but the script is nowhere near funny enough to sustain a near-5-minute film.

You could trim it down very considerably without losing anything - and you'd gain a lot in comedic value. Also, the dialogue needs to be more natural.

And, although swearing CAN be funny, there's too much of it and it detracts from the comedy.

Multi thread postings annoy!

Quote: sootyj @ November 28 2010, 12:36 PM GMT

annoy!

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Shouldn't that be 'ahoy!' ?