Hi everyone,
I'm new to all of this and trying to be funny never works so I won't bother, anyhow I've got a website that I'd like you to look at which is funny and will hopefully warm yer cockles.
Please take a look and let me know your thoughts.
Many thanks,
Colin.
Hi Colin. Read the first section. Not really sure what that was about. A story, serialised? You've used there instead of their towards the end.
Hi Nat, ooops!!! just changed it...the site is just about me, all of the stories are based upon real events. If you look at the categories in the side bar it may make a little more sense?? I'm not the most technoligically minded person so maybe it should be laid out a little better. It's just meant to make people laugh...did it stir a little something in you?
Cheers,
Colin.
Not particularly the one I read if I'm honest. It's decently written, but I don't know if the stories are constructed to their best. For example, it was fairly obvious where the Mr Smith thing was going and the nice 'reveal' of your dad going 3 doors down should have been a bit more of a surprise. Just for me though. Many people will likely disagree with me (they often do!).
Oh, and in the Benidorm one, I don't think anyone says 'Star Wars bar', as it's known as the Cantina.
Cheers for your comments, you can't win 'em all as they say.
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