Stand Up sketch Page 7

Quote: David Bussell @ October 20 2010, 8:32 PM BST

Taking the weight of debate thus far on board I've decided to soften the jokes by outright stealing the one's Steve wrote. I trust everyone will now be happy.

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David if I can help it's a shit skit or what ever it is supposed to be. It ain't going to be filmed, it ain't going to be cartooned, I don't know why a man of your talent is even bothered bringing down this level of nonsense or your head. Does this help? Loved your last comic strip by the way !

EDIT: Just read your rewritten version.

Quote: Marc P @ October 20 2010, 10:23 PM BST

David if I can help it's a shit skit or what ever it is supposed to be. It ain't going to be filmed, it ain't going to be cartooned, I don't know why a man of your talent is even bothered bringing down this level of nonsense or your head. Does this help? Loved your last comic strip by the way !

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A little harsh there.

Quote: Matthew Stott @ October 20 2010, 10:24 PM BST

A little harsh there.

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And you can f**k off!

Quote: bushbaby @ October 20 2010, 9:57 PM BST

Because that's the comeuppance of bigots

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Fair enough. Now which particular God are we talking about here?

Quote: bigfella @ October 20 2010, 9:59 PM BST

If it's the second one, then why give anyone the chance of throwing stuff at you?

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Maybe you're right but you know how it is when someone tells you you shouldn't do something...

[quote name="David Bussell" post="681986" date="October 20 2010, 10:48 PM BST"]Fair enough. Now which particular God are we talking about here?

Which ever one you wish to believe in, personally there is none but even I as an atheist would laugh at a God smiting the man. In fact I'd belly-laugh at that and forgive all the racist jokes.

Quote: Marc P @ October 20 2010, 10:23 PM BST

David if I can help it's a shit skit or what ever it is supposed to be. It ain't going to be filmed, it ain't going to be cartooned, I don't know why a man of your talent is even bothered bringing down this level of nonsense or your head. Does this help? Loved your last comic strip by the way !

EDIT: Just read your rewritten version.

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Fair play, Marc, I opened it up to criticism after all.

Quote: bushbaby @ October 20 2010, 10:49 PM BST

Which ever one you wish to believe in, personally there is none but even I as an atheist would laugh at a God smiting the man

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God smiting him, his throat being cut by a bow-tie, he's dead either way, right? Personally I think bringing religion into a sketch this rancid would only make it more taboo. Or are you suggesting I Frankie Boyle this to a thousand degrees?

Quote: David Bussell @ October 20 2010, 10:55 PM BST

Fair play, Marc, I opened it up to criticism after all.

God smiting him, his throat being cut by a bow-tie, he's dead either way, right? Personally I think bringing religion into a sketch this rancid would only make it more taboo. Or are you suggesting I Frankie Boyle this to a thousand degrees?

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David, you have brought religion into it and the only way out is for a God to behead him. Any other way isn't funny.

Quote: bushbaby @ October 20 2010, 10:56 PM BST

David, you have brought religion into it

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Remind me where I did that again?

Quote: David Bussell @ October 20 2010, 10:57 PM BST

Remind me where I did that again?

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hahahaha devious too. Not as devious as me though, I copied and pasted it into a doc

Quote: bushbaby @ October 20 2010, 11:04 PM BST

hahahaha devious too. Not as devious as me though, I copied and pasted it into a doc

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Could you cut and paste it here so I can read it? As far as I recall, in three drafts I never wrote anything about religion. Not that I wouldn't have had the shit comic go after religion, it's just not true is all.

Good some good feedback there, Dave.

Sorry, I mean f**king weird feedback.

Quote: David Bussell @ October 20 2010, 11:07 PM BST

Could you cut and paste it here so I can read it? As far as I recall, in three drafts I never wrote anything about religion. Not that I wouldn't have had the shit comic go after religion, it's just not true is all.

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Just kidding David, the religion'd come in by God beheading him, I thought that a good ending but it's your work

Fair enough, Bush. Bit out of the blue for my taste but there you go.

I'm surprised that people don't get the point of this. I would have expected that on this site that people would have the comedy savvy to understand satire. I can understand if some people don't thnk the level of the jokes justified the message, but to think this is a racist sketch is just f**king stupid. Plain as.

Quote: Nat Wicks @ October 21 2010, 8:53 AM BST

I'm surprised that people don't get the point of this. I would have expected that on this site that people would have the comedy savvy to understand satire. I can understand if some people don't thnk the level of the jokes justified the message, but to think this is a racist sketch is just f**king stupid. Plain as.

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What is being satirised here? Sorry I am obviously f**king stupid?