Hi, I have just started my blogg http://www.worldsworstbuddhist.com/ and would love to get some feedback from the people who know commedy, you guys, be brutal if you thinks its needed and nice if the same.
Rich x
Is this Funny?
Welcome to the board!
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I read down to line five and where you spelt 'plums' as 'plumbs'.
Go and do something you have a talent for, for f**ksake, even if it's oiling locks. life is short.
Not to mention the double m in comedy. Oh, wait...
Quote: Richard Fenton @ October 15 2010, 1:07 PM BSTbe brutal if you thinks its needed
Translates to: Godot may post.
Funniness is relative and I've no doubt there will be several people who think your blog is hilarious.
However, if youre going to be funny by slagging off somebody or something, it's always wise to ensure that either (i) the target knows it deserves slagging or (ii) your audience believes the target deserves slagging.
The problem you have is that people of all ages have a right to stand around naked in an officially-designated public undressing area and they also have a right to have various bits of their anatomy lying less tautly about their person than in days of yore.
Had your article been about old women's tits, you would now be under attack on all sides from the forum's women and those who support them right or wrong in the hope of getting a cyber-f**k.
And then I see (I only glanced) you go on to discuss Ann Robinson's face. That's not very original (your target, I mean, not her face).
Oh, and you use 'f**k' and 'f**king' too much. Way, way way too much.
My, we are a cruel bunch.
I'd lay off the cuss words.
Needs more f**king swearing.
Quote: Ming the Mirthless @ October 15 2010, 6:01 PM BSTHad your article been about old women's tits, you would now be under attack on all sides from the forum's women and those who support them right or wrong in the hope of getting a cyber-f**k.
No old lady titties for me, thankyea much 