Quote: Will Cam @ October 1 2010, 12:46 PM BSTNice Sketch
Ta Will.
Quote: AngieBaby @ October 2 2010, 12:44 AM BSTLiked it a lot, agree with Nat about the toilet line, you don't need it, and it takes you too far down the tampon down the toilet to get back to the werewolf reveal.
Thanks Angie. On balance, I think I might lose the toilet line, I guess the rest of the stuff does it's job and getting to reveal a little quicker would not do any harm either.
Quote: Steve Sunshine @ October 2 2010, 12:49 AM BSTIt's very well written.
& I didn't see the pay off coming.I thought that she might be a fly
or am I getting confused.