Diagnosis. Page 4

With a £10,000 budget what is your next sketch going to be?

I'd do something about cats and outerspace. And maybe dragons. Featuring Noel Edmunds.

Kill Noel Edmunds

Add jokes later.

I'll feed him to the catdragon.

Quote: Mr Ashdown @ September 14 2010, 3:32 PM BST

GP: We've got to...

(MRS NESBIT LEANS IN)

GP: BURN ALL OF YOUR CATS!

MRS NESBIT: Even ... Prince Meowington?

GP: ESPECIALLY Prince Meowington.

MRS NESBIT NODS, WIPES AWAY A TEAR, EXITS.

THE GP LOOKS TO HIS LEFT. WE SEE A GIANT MOUSE, STOOD UPRIGHT, CASUALLY MUNCHING ON A TRIANGLE OF CHEESE.

GP: Did I do good?

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Yeah, this was funny, concise and well written - you planning on filming it?

And Bussell's ending is my favourite extended

Quote: Chopz @ September 15 2010, 12:42 PM BST

Yeah, this was funny, concise and well written - you planning on filming it?

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I'm sure I will be. Just need to find a camcorder and some friends. Give me a few years.

Nats,

what can I say that hasn't already been said? It's a great sketch, it's got legs and there is a lot of potential for different scenarios / punches.

I'm looking forward to the next one.

Thanks Angie

I like it as well.
And it works fine just as it is.
Good stuff.

Hooray!

Quote: Chappers @ September 14 2010, 2:41 PM BST

How about the Doctor gives her a wheelie bin?

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That is funny.

Quote: David Bussell @ September 14 2010, 2:56 PM BST

Very nice first sketch, Nat!

I prefer it with the lighter ending myself. It might also, as an experiment, be worth trying a version adding in Mr Ashdown's dimension - that the doctor persuading her to give up cats has one sat on his lap...

PATIENT:
But you have a cat right there!

DOCTOR:
This cat is for recreational purposes only - I can stop whenever I want.

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Perfect Ending.

Well written Sketch Nat. I agree with Sooty that it ended abruptly.
I felt it needed a stronger punch.

Loved Davids & Ashdowns is it with the giant mouse.

Very well done Nat.