Hmm I think if anything the dialogue should be less funny. I think it works because there is really only one joke. The tank is big and far away.
For me sometimes extra jokes get in the way.
But you may be right.
Ta.
Lobster Page 2
BACKGROUND BRIAN IS BEING SERVED ON A GIANT PLATTER TO THE BIG LOBSTER WHO HAS BRIAN'S HEAD IN HIS CRUNCHER CLAW.
No shagging for our crustacean chum?
Quote: sootyj @ August 24 2010, 7:18 PM BSTNo shagging for our crustacean chum?
Dinner first.