British Comedy Guide

Housewife

INT. HOME.

A WOMAN IS DOING HOUSEWORK. SHE LOOKS FED UP.

WOMAN:
All day, every day. Cleaning, cooking, laundry, tidying up after an ungrateful husband... it never ends.

V/O:
Hey lady, you look stressed.

WOMAN LOOKS AROUND SUSPICIOUSLY.

V/O:
Fancy some help around the house?

WOMAN NODS.

FX DOORBELL.

V/O:
Open that door to a blissful new existence.

WOMAN RUSHES TO OPEN DOOR TO SEE TEN-ARMED HINDU GODDESS DURGA STANDING THERE.
DURGA BURSTS INTO THE HOUSE AND BEGINS TO HOOVER, DUST, REARRANGE FURNITURE AND APPLY MAKE UP TO HOUSEWIFE SIMULTANEOUSLY.

V/O:
Durga is the queen of multi-tasking, she loves the jobs you hate.

DURGA HAS THE HOUSE SPOTLESS IN NO TIME.

WOMAN:
Oh Durga, with your help I can now become a lazy slob like my hubbie.

AS DURGA AND WOMAN EMBRACE, DURGA SLIPS A HAND INTO WOMAN'S PURSE UNNOTICED, REMOVING SOME BANKNOTES AND THEN LEAVES.

That's a very nice idea, maybe could tghten some of the language abit more ?? Get it sounding more like an actual advert?

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