The Snuggle Uggles Animation

Howdy

Not sure if it's of any interest, but realised recently I never put up the full five minute version of this in critique: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z5d9ydmAzGg .

About six months ago I put up the first three minute version of The Snuggle Uggles. Comments were very, very helpful. This final version is much different thanks to those comments.

It's a little late for me to change much about this now as I've already sent it to various producers and producer-types (so far it's been liked. Nobody's said 'Dear God, don't send me more stuff!' yet. Hurrah), but still, any thoughts on the script, voices, music, editing, look, etc, would be great as I want to do more animating soon.

Cheers
Y. Wingnut

Liked it lookede and sounded as good as some of the stuff on the Kids channels so ghood job emulating that.

Thought it was perfectly funny, not enough laughs for a five minute clip in my opinion, but I don't laugh at much so it might be just me.

Any ways I like it. Good work.

That was a lot of fun; voices were great and for me the script had enough laughs. I assume the South Park reference at the end is deliberate, but I am not sure that it is a good idea.

Thanks for people's comments so far.

How did I reference South Park, Timbo? Certainly wasn't deliberate.

"I learnt a lesson today..." is how every episode of South Park ends. (Or at least, I can't recall if that is the exact phrase, but it is close enough to have rung a bell.)

The South Park phrase, I took the trouble to look it up, is "You know what? I learnt something today..."

I think they dropped it in later series. In any case, if no-one but me recognised any similarity it probably doesn't matter.

Quote: Timbo @ August 22 2010, 11:55 PM BST

"You know what? I learnt something today..."

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I remember that being a catchphrase in South Park. Think, "See, I've learnt a lesson today..." is probably different enough.