Sorry. 
Last one for a while I promise. Just want to know if you think it's a keep n tweak, or, leave it alone it smells.
INT. SHABBY ROOM. DAY.
A MAN (ALAN) IS TIED TO A HARD BACKED CHAIR. ANOTHER MAN (WILL) IS INTERROGATING HIM.
WILL:
If you confess I'll let you go and no harm will come to you, I promise.
ALAN:
I'm not confessing to something I didn't do. I'm not afraid.
WILL:
Maybe you're right. Maybe you don't fear pain for yourself, but what about your loved ones?
THE DOOR OPENS AND A BOY (TOM) IS PUSHED INTO THE ROOM.
ALAN:
You bastard, dragging my son into this. Don't worry Tom. Everything will be ok.
WILL:
Now Tom, come over here would you?
TOM WALKS OVER TO WILL, SCUFFING HIS FEET AS HE DOES SO. ALAN GRIPS THE CHAIR IN DISTRESS.
ALAN:
Aaargh! Pick your feet up when you walk. Those trainers cost a fortune, you'll wear them down.
WILL:
My my Tom, looks like you've got a bit of a cold. Here.
WILL HANDS TOM A TISSUE. TOM SNIFFS LOUDLY. ALAN CONVULSES WITH PAIN.
ALAN:
Urgh! Don't sniff, use your tissue. If you keep sniffing you'll never get rid of your cold. Blow your nose.
WILL:
Just admit what you done and all this will stop.
ALAN:
No. The truth has to stand for something in this world. You can be strong can't you Tom? Strong for daddy?
WILL:
Just to show you I'm not a complete monster I got him a little present.
WILL HANDS A PERSONAL STEREO TO TOM. TOM TAKES IT AND PUTS THE EARPHONES IN.
SFX: TINNY SOUND OF LOUD MUSIC COMING FROM THE EARPHONES.
ALAN:
Urgh, argh, You'll make yourself deaf. Is that what you want? You can't possibly need it that loud.
TOM:
Uh?
ALAN:
I said you can't poss...Ok ok, I'll confess, I'll say anything just let him be.
WILL:
I knew you'd come round. Now tell me what I want to hear.
ALAN:
Okay okay. It was me. It was me who put your Action Man in the toaster.
WILL:
I knew it. Finally, after all these years.
ALAN:
You've got what you want now let the boy go.
WILL:
As you wish. Tom? You can stop it now.
TOM:
Uh?
WILL PULLS OUT THE EARPHONES FROM TOM'S EARS.
WILL:
That's all for now, thank you Tom. But please keep the gift.
TOM:
Wow cheers uncle Will.
TOM LEAVES THE ROOM.
ALAN:
You wait until mother hears about this.
END.
