I feel like you're focussing on the wrong bit of my feedback...
Dan
Rebadging Page 2
Stellar perfromances again. I'm with the more of a logic to the 'Tool' punch brigade - but a minor quibble. And I presume you got some specially made short comedy doors in. 
Great performances, did raise a smile
Downside for me was the hand on the collar and as soon as you stopped at tool boxes I guessed his new title
Still enjoyed
I really liked it. The hand on collar didn't bother me at all, seemed quite fitting as the character seemed a bit timid. Probably better as a series of sketches, each getting more preposterous titles as goes. But I thought it was good, I did laugh so good work. Only tiny thing was lighting seems a bit off. But small thing. Enjoyed it.
Quote: swerytd @ July 20 2010, 11:42 AM BSTI feel like you're focussing on the wrong bit of my feedback...
Dan
To be fair, I thought your feedback focussed on the wrong part of the sketch.
Quote: Marc P @ July 20 2010, 12:01 PM BST
Stellar perfromances again. I'm with the more of a logic to the 'Tool' punch brigade - but a minor quibble. And I presume you got some specially made short comedy doors in.
The ad edit will cut down on the hang time between the setup and the punch, which will hopefully improve things.
As for the door, I insisted on having the height reduced to enhance my masculinity. I also demanded the ceilings be lowered and Stuart shrunk using a complex boiling process. Unfortunately this pushed the cost of the production up to £1700k, which rather offset the other sketch costing nothing.
Very good stuff. Great characters and performances. You really bounced off each other with contrasting characters. More please. I love Chopz.
New 60 second cut for anyone that gives one ounce of a frig...
Quote: David Bussell @ July 27 2010, 11:12 AM BSTNew 60 second cut for anyone that gives one ounce of a frig...
Never mind all that bollocks What did you make of San Diego???
Very slick by the way.
One edit - I'd lose the yeah, in the yeah, whatever. You're getting two beats rather than the one you only need and it changes the meaning in this specific context.
I am not picky!
Quote: Marc P @ July 27 2010, 11:13 AM BSTNever mind all that bollocks
San Diego was crazy. I actually got to ride an escalator with a couple of Hit Girls (dressed as the character from Kick Ass) who passed another Hit Girl coming down the escalator opposite and remarked, once out of earshot, "Well she certainly put the 'S' into Hit Girl!"
That alone made the holiday worthwhile.