Quote: Steve Sunshine @ July 16 2010, 11:57 PM BSTYes.
Now write some more stuff.
Yes boss!
Vodka Pants sketch Page 2
This was very nice. Lovely idea. I saw it as kind of an old style advert. What if the warning at the very end is 'Warning: May cause dads to fall off ladders'.
Just a suggestion but great stuff Marooned 
Quote: Otterfox @ July 17 2010, 8:57 AM BSTThis was very nice. Lovely idea. I saw it as kind of an old style advert. What if the warning at the very end is 'Warning: May cause dads to fall off ladders'.
Just a suggestion but great stuff Marooned
Noted. 
Thanks for that, Otterfox.
Just changed it to the latest draft...
Loved the sketch. It read very well. Visually would be very interesting to see but like I say it read well.